-Intro=Characters,5 Ws,Setting.
Middle=Problem.
End=Resolution.
It was a warm day and it all started in an abandoned city where two herods found each other and battled iron man did not want to fight you know because he is a girl but hulk went out fully so iron man had no choice but to get a bigger suit well he could've just fought him with his regular suit but he was a girl to be precise.
You know how tony stark is so rich well in space he put a massive suit called veronica it
looks like this. As they fought the earth shook as they were in place. Hulk was getting tossed around like ragdolls just like tony if he still had his original suit.
As they were fighting hulk gave up and turned back into bruce and then they fought the real enemy ultron.
Hey Ocean, this is an interesting piece of writing. I like how you described what the story was about and where it took place. But maybe next time re-read your work to see if your grammar is correct. Apart from that keep up the great work.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic story, I love Iron Man and the Hulk! I thought the pictures were a great touch to the story. Maybe next time you could reread the story to make sure it makes sense.
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